Valentine especial (I Breathe In Your Love)

[Neeta]

God defined my life
more clearly last night
my heart laced with devine messages
from the man that I love
sometimes presented themselves
like a letter that I never received
far away in another state
is where my true love is
I grasp the thought of his prescence
whenever I can
and breath his love
upon every new day
just as often as I take him to sleep
in my heart every night
I always keep him close to my side
finally i allowed my heart and soul
to slow down and sit down
to pray
in the midst of the storm
when I often felt all alone
when I forget that God is but a heartbeat away
dark emptiness screams at me
from the unwritten pages of my life
a single tear releases and trickles down my cheek
finally reaching my chin
I placed my hand gently over my heart
I'd open my heart a little bit wider
for God to place
the dreams becoming so real
he wants me to see
that he carefully selected
just for me
I finally admitted to myself
that I found happiness all over again
after God placed you in my life
my life dramatically altered forever
in all good respects
a chance at happiness once more
when I opened up my heart to let you in :)

[mohua]

are u a poet? what a emagin poet u are!

God defined my life
more clearly last night
my heart laced with devine messages
from the man that I love
sometimes presented themselves
like a letter that I never received
far away in another state
is where my true love is
I grasp the thought of his prescence
whenever I can
and breath his love
upon every new day
just as often as I take him to sleep
in my heart every night
I always keep him close to my side
finally i allowed my heart and soul
to slow down and sit down
to pray
in the midst of the storm
when I often felt all alone
when I forget that God is but a heartbeat away
dark emptiness screams at me
from the unwritten pages of my life
a single tear releases and trickles down my cheek
finally reaching my chin
I placed my hand gently over my heart
I'd open my heart a little bit wider
for God to place
the dreams becoming so real
he wants me to see
that he carefully selected
just for me
I finally admitted to myself
that I found happiness all over again
after God placed you in my life
my life dramatically altered forever
in all good respects
a chance at happiness once more
when I opened up my heart to let you in :)

[megrisoft]

It was really a very good poem.

[Neeta]

Dankesh means thankyou

[priya]

Hello nita,

Your poem is very good and i want to wish you very very happy Valentine day.

[sunil]

Hey! lots of poets here in Indiabook, Nice to see that, Keep on posting nice poems.
BTW all poems are self written or ... :D